Poetry 99: kids winners
Young, and wild, and free
First place
Hair
My hair flows through the wind, then tangles like vines;
And I hope it dries before I brush, brush.
Hair strong as an ox and grows like a forest.
Brown like dark chocolate and soft and frizzy but has cruel curls.
My hair bounces like a rabbit and as big as waves.
Pulling and pulling twisting in a knot I scream; “My hair, my hair!”
Finally it unravels and turns beautiful like a horse’s mane.
-Liliana Rodriguez
In addition to writing poetry, Liliana Rodriguez says she enjoys fiction. “I’m writing scary stories,” she says. When she’s not working with words, the Wildflower Open Classroom student likes singing, mostly pop music but also a little country.
Second placeThe moon and the sun together as one
Sun and moon so lonely and sad
moon loved sun
sun loved moon
they couldn’t see each other
one would be up
the other down
every day
waiting for that very moment
where day and night meet
they searched space for solutions
through many days they searched
till finding a strange planet
an old man lived there
and asked what they’ve come for
they said for a solution
we never get to see each other
the old man said
he could not make them stop moving
but he could combine them into one
so they took what they could
-Arlee Sheehan
Arlee Sheehan has a well-rounded range of interests for a 9-year-old. She likes to play with Legos with her friends, read graphic novels and play with her two cats, Smokey and Ocho (so named because “he has eight fingers on his front two paws”).
Third placeSNORKLE (Acrostic)
Swim real slow.
Now follow me.
Open your eyes. See the fish.
Red, blue and yellow.
Know what’s darting all around.
Look, don’t touch the coral
Even turtles fly above.
-Mona Hendriks
Poetry 99 first-timer Mona Hendriks is already an internationally published writer. With her grandparents living in Japan, she’s submitted writing while visiting them. Back in the U.S., her “SNORKLE” poem is included in her self-made collection of drawings and poems titled Ocean Poetry.
Honorable mentions
My Friends
I hear talking
Nice feet walking on the ground
I jump in the trampoline
And play board games
We pretend to play mailman
We dress up as different seasons
We give each other scores
We try to hide from our mom and dad
-Clover Bailey, Chico, 7
I Saw a Cat Make a Cake
I saw a cat make a cake
he put very random things in it
He put a bell, a book, and a box.
He put a dish, a deer, and a door.
He also put a fan, a fish, and a flea.
A gown, a game, and a guitar.
A hand, a hat, and a house.
And that’s what happens when a cat makes a cake.
-Chloe Onstot, Chico, 9
Flowers
There is a cluster
A blossom outside, blue, red.
Taste like grass honey.
-Julio Alvarez, Chico, 8
Legos
Legos are really awesome when you build something big.
You can build houses, mouses, people, and shovels.
I once built the White House.
I like the “click” of the brick against brick like a button being pressed.
-Kai Herzog, Chico, 11
I Am Poem
I am curious and kind;
I wonder what is outside of space;
I hear whistling of sirens;
I see a crowded street with people bustling from around the world;
I want everyone to be more cautious about the earth;
I am curious and kind.
I pretend I can talk to anything;
I feel a cool breeze on my coat;
I worry about the future;
I am curious and kind.
I understand that not everything is fair;
I say “you can do anything with enough time;”
I dream anything;
I believe no one is perfect;
I am curious and kind.
-Emma Nikolai, Chico, 11