Poetry 99: junior high winners
Middle-school verse
First place
Forget-me-not
I like to think that violets
are the bits of galaxy
that angels cut out
to make the stars
I like to think that roses
were the lacy handkerchiefs
used to wipe up
the blood of our wars
I like to think that cherry blossoms
only fall when many people
feel sorrow all at once
so they can be a happy distraction
I like to think that everyone
has a pretty gauze veil that
blurs the vision of the inner eye
Try lifting the corner
-Thea Oldfield
Sherwood Montessori student Thea Oldfield already has one CN&R writing victory under her belt this school year, having placed third in the Fiction 59 contest last fall. Where her 59-word story was “pretty dark,” she said she tried to go lighter in tone for this poem. Oldfield says she’s still enjoying dancing at Dance Evolution Studio in Paradise, and is excited to start up at Inspire School of Arts & Sciences next year.
Second placeThe Hard Worker
Born in Mexico.
Adobe house.
Came to the United States,
To help the parents
He hasn’t seen since
Age 15.
2 years learning English.
9 jobs.
6 days a week.
11 hours a day.
7 years later,
His own business.
Success.
New struggles.
Father of one,
Age 35.
-Isabella Vasquez
An eighth-grader at Achieve Charter School in Paradise, Isabella Vasquez wrote her poem as part of an assignment that tasked the students with writing about a person who had been through hard times. Vasquez chose her father. In addition to writing, the eighth-grader says she enjoys painting and learning about history.
Third placeImagery
Condescending miracles drop from cold wit
Choked on coincidental imagery,
Pandemonium of thought
Infliction of pain
Shocks of unlit forgery
Currency’s anger of unlit greed
Waiting for the next episode
Watching my life fly like a bullet from a chamber
Inhale, exhale.
dark
-Colin Bailey
The Bailey family—regular winners in the CN&R writing contests—are once again generously represented in Poetry 99. Joining third-place junior-high finisher Colin Bailey are his younger siblings Cedar (second place and honorable mention, kids) and Clover (honorable mention, kids). Colin is in his final semester at Sherwood Montessori, and the avid skateboarder—and skateboard park advocate, with Fix Chico Skatepark —has added playing rugby to his busy schedule.
Lingering
Day in and day out
Feeling lonely
Having no one to talk to
Remembering
Remembering each time school came first
Never getting time with her
Oh mother, you work so hard
But yet I feel as if
You were never here
Just a lingering ghost
The whispers of computer keys typing
The bright and cheery home
Now is eerie quiet
Late into the night
You can hear frustrated sighs
The screaming of metal against the wood
The slap of her computer shutting for the night
Only to be opened tomorrow
-Jessica Mittag
A Day of Sadness
My dad has multiple sclerosis.
He didn’t have this as a kid.
It just happened.
We don’t know why.
Doctors don’t know why.
Or how.
Or when.
It’s unknown when it will happen
Just if you’re unlucky.
It is a very scary disease.
It is incurable.
People with this disease are paralyzed.
Luckily for my dad he isn’t.
My dad is loyal and respectful.
He will not make you mad for fun.
I look up to him.
He has not given up.
He is making himself healthier.
He is a very lucky man.
-Noah Siler
untitled
if you were an artist how would you paint me?
with deep solid strokes
or your brush sweeping softly
would you paint me by number
quickly filling the lines
or sketch me and take your time
would you use vibrant
or plain shades of gray
would you change me in any way?
would you gaze at me proudly
or ship me away
sometime in the dim light of the day.
-Zin Pollock-Dowd
The Universe
The universe
A concept most don’t get
It keeps its secrets
there are consequences for exploring
It is so big
even the greatest feel defeated
It is dotted with questions
That have yet to be answered
The universe
-Mario Giannini
Bookshelf
The bookshelf was empty
except for one book
that one book the one on monsters
made the bookshelf full
-Judah Fairchild